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Tuesday, October 14, 2008

"Something you lost will soon turn up"

Okay...so...this might be stupid...it might be not. But let me know what y'all think. So it begins with the teenage girl character lounging in her bed holding a picture of her boyfriend in a heart frame. She holds the picture tightly and sighs. She picks up her phone next to her and dials. A boy's voice answers. The girl says "last night was so amazing..I am so....the rest of her sentence gets cut off as she hears a knock on her door. She gets up to open it. She looks straight ahead and sees no one, as she is about to close the door she looks down and sees a little girl wearing all pink. (The personification of Virginity) The little girl looks all cute and innocent at first. The teenager bends down to talk to her. All of a sudden the little girl gets angry, pulls out a large bat and strikes the teen straight across the face until she hits the floor appearing lifeless. The scene ends.

I wanted mine to be short and straight to the point. I don't know if it works or not. So please let me know. Coming up with initial stories are not my forte. Also..I want to do this in Flash.

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Blogger Max Salazar said...

Haha. I like it. :D

I'm wondering if Virginity should be dressed in white instead of pink though. Since white represents purity and such. Dunno.

8:45 PM

Blogger Jessica said...

Dunno...I understand where you are going with white=pureness. Just didn't know what color people would associate with virginity. Literally or traditionally. Thanks for the feedback though.

8:47 PM

Blogger Jen said...

I think white would be good for virginity. Not so sure about the pink.

8:53 PM

Blogger Alisa said...

Hahha I think it works. Maybe end with the phone laying on the bed and the boy saying "Hello...? Hello?" then hanging up. I think a white dress with a pink sash is a good compromise.

9:04 PM

Blogger isam said...

maybe the girl should have a nametag that says hymen. just kiddin.
i love it.
for some reason i can picture the girl being all like OMG STFU1!!LOLZ, i dunno why.

10:23 PM


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