Cute animatic Max! I love your main character. He's so cute. One observation..everything that happens to him happens in the same scene. Maybe you could change it up a little.
example...something happens when he first walks out of his house to make the man laugh, then something should happen in front of the kids, then something big happens (like the wolf) at a bus stop or in front of school or something. Just a thought.
My plan was that first I wanted to show how the boy annoys people and weirds them out. Then all these bad things spontaneously happen to him out of nowhere and the other kids enjoy it.
The kids' awkward reaction at the end needs to change though. They should still probably laugh or something.
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Cute animatic Max! I love your main character. He's so cute.
One observation..everything that happens to him happens in the same scene. Maybe you could change it up a little.
example...something happens when he first walks out of his house to make the man laugh, then something should happen in front of the kids, then something big happens (like the wolf) at a bus stop or in front of school or something. Just a thought.
Looks great though.
6:33 PM
I hear ya.
My plan was that first I wanted to show how the boy annoys people and weirds them out. Then all these bad things spontaneously happen to him out of nowhere and the other kids enjoy it.
The kids' awkward reaction at the end needs to change though. They should still probably laugh or something.
7:28 PM
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