Kat's First Layout
Seeing everyone else post made me feel like I had to get my ass in gear, so I made this! I think the first and second panels need to either be fixed or entirely redone, but the other two are okay. What do you guys think?And that is definitely not the actual typeface I'm using for the title.
posted by Kat Morris at 11:12 AM
4 Comments:
this is looking awesome, if either panel where to be changed i'd say panel 2, just because its somewhat similar to 1 but i really like panel 1, it might look more impressive if it where further away, it might look more epic.
9:25 PM
scratch that last part, i think it's just the right distance :)
you've been doing an awesome job managing and organizing this whole thing! if it weren't for you i don't think there would be a comic.
9:28 PM
Originally, I had the second panel as a far away shot too, but then panels 1-3 were all similar distances and the page felt really dead.
Other than shifting the girl in panel two a little more to the right, I might leave things as they are. If I waste too much time trying to be brilliant, the comic is never going to get done.
9:28 AM
And thanks. I'm excited for the day when FakeHeads will have a real accomplishment under its belt.
9:28 AM
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