Kat's First Layout

Seeing everyone else post made me feel like I had to get my ass in gear, so I made this! I think the first and second panels need to either be fixed or entirely redone, but the other two are okay. What do you guys think?

And that is definitely not the actual typeface I'm using for the title.

I'm not sure which direction I'm going with this yet. It's definitely going to be this on-edge looking old man I've been drawing a lot of lately. It's probably going to have something to do with either pirates or longshorman. And some fighting. It may also have to do with a bitter and confused child counterpart, maybe some kind of storytelling, like the old man is pulling the child into his delusional fantasies of fighting pirates. Not sure though. Mostly I just want to see awkward human interaction with this guy and others. Maybe even make him cry. More to follow.